A first draft of the early life of my father. I would be interested to read any comments. I cannot get the pictures to come up. This piece may be modified and used as a flash back yet, but I wanted to get something about his youth down. The original is on A5 so the pictures would reach across the page. Most of the information comes from family papers although some background is researched. i would pull works consulted together at the end of the chapter, if it gets to the point of publication.
ARCHIBALD WILLIAM McCLELLAN
Chapter One
“You are the man
of the house now Archie,” his father had said, “Look after your mother and
Stuart and little Jackie, work hard at school and be a good boy. Ask Grandpa
Parsons or one of your uncles if you need any help. I’ll write whenever I can.”
In the new year of 1917 my father
was eight and a half years old. By the 10th January his paternal grandfather had died of a short
illness, his father had resigned his job as a fitter and workshop foreman to
join the war effort and his mother had given birth to his baby brother.
“But, Daddy, do you have to
go?”
“It’s my duty, son. You wouldn’t
want your friends to call me a coward, would you?”
“No Daddy,” said Archie reluctantly.
So it’s happened
at last, he thought. He’d heard the arguments, especially after Uncle Sid had
died in France.
His dad had signed up at the last minute under something he called the Derby
Scheme. He didn’t have much choice, he’d said. That was over a year ago, but
now he’d given up his job and done his basic training.
“Mummy is Daddy going to France
where Uncle Sid was killed?” he asked later while his mother nursed the baby.
“No, son, he’s off to the desert in Mesopotamia. He’s going to mend the army lorries so they
can drive through the desert.”
“Are there Germans there?”
“No, it’s their friends the Turks.”
“How long will he be away? Will he
stay there till the war’s over?”
“I expect so, now no more questions.
Poor little Jackie needs to get some sleep.”
He wanted to ask
about smallpox and stories about soldiers dying there. He’d heard them arguing
about vaccinations and being sent to the desert as a death sentence, but he
kept it to himself.
Meanwhile Archie
continued to do his best at Parkhurst
Road Boys
School in Tottenham. Many
of the other boys had fathers and brothers away at the war. Most were on the
Western Front, so on the one hand Archie felt a bit special with a dad in
Mesopotamia, on the other hand the other boys knew almost nothing of the
Expeditionary Force there so he talked quite a lot about his Uncle Stanley who
lived next door with Auntie Emmie and who was also on the Western Front.
Life in Tottenham continued difficult
with food and fuel limited and expensive. Archie’s father had given up a good
job as foreman of the machine shop at the Liquid
Air and Rescue Syndicate Ltd in Willesden where he was valued for his
competence and reliability. Tottenham
was growing rapidly before the First World War. People were moving from other
parts of London, and increasingly, from further
afield as factories were being built on the cheaper land by the marshes in the Lea Valley,
and housing for the workers spread to match.
A music hall was built in 1908 and a
skating rink was added a year later. With railway yards and new civic buildings
parts of the borough gave the feel of an urban centre. Yet as a series of paintings
by John Bonny showed, there was much that remained rural.
Rectory Farm, White Hart Lane,
Tottenham. c1910 from an oil painting, John Bonny.
Archie’s father wrote regularly to
his wife, the letters taking up to three months to arrive. It was clear that he
missed the family, always asked after the boys and asked his wife, Nellie, to
get Archie to write to him. His brother Stuart was nearly five when Archie
first began to write to his father. Stuart was an irritating little boy at that
age but Archie tried not to bully him. He had promised his father he would look
after him so he tried his best. At first he didn’t realise how long his letters
would take to reach his father, so when his first special page arrived from Mesopotamia with his mother’s regular letter he was
delighted.
6/5/18 From Daddy
Dear Archie,
Just a few lines in answer to your
welcome letters I am pleased you are all alright at home, and that you have
been good boys and are getting on at school, now you must try and win that
scholarship, ask mummy if you want to know anything, if she doesn’t know ask
granddad he will tell you. You must also try and learn the piano, by the time I
get home, and then I can hear you play, Well Sonny I am sending you a photo of
some Arab children so you can see what they are like out here, also one for
Stuart now don’t destroy them and I will try and get you some more. Well son I
don’t know of anything to tell you only that I am very pleased to hear you and
Stuart and dear little Jackie are alright and thanks for writing, so now close
with love to you all from your loving Daddy
XXXXX XXXXX XXXXX
Archie Stuart Jackie
He was pleased
his father wanted him to pass his scholarship and redoubled his efforts at
school. His report in the summer of 1918 placed him 3rd out of 51
pupils, commended him on his effort but added that he showed carelessness at
times. If he was to get that scholarship he would have to take more care with
his work.
The war was over in the November of
that year and the family waited anxiously for father’s return. In his letters in August and October he
anticipated coming home in the near future. The rumours of the desert as death
sentence resurfaced in Archie’s mind, although Uncle Stan had also not yet
returned from France.
They heard no more until a letter sent
in March 1919 from Rawalpindi.
Archie’s letter from the previous November had only just reached him as he had
been transferred to the North West Frontier.
His father does his best to reply to
a long list of engineering questions Archie has posed him and in the following
letter, sent a month later he wrote,
If you can only do what you say, that you
can read a micrometer and Vernier thoroughly you ought to make a good engineer.
Well sonny, you say you want me to teach you when I come home, well all I can
say is if you keep on as you are going, you will be able to teach me something
in figures at any rate.
Archie’s
interest in science extended into chemistry. In the same letter his father
wrote,
Well what about this bomb of yours, don’t
get blowing the house up with it as I want somewhere to come home to.
Archie had mixed
a heap of the constituents of gunpowder on his bedroom floor and put a match to
it as an experiment. It was not compressed so it did not explode, but burnt a
hole through the floor to the room below.
His father returned home and was
demobilised at the beginning of 1920 in time to encourage Archie to win a
scholarship to Risley
Avenue Central
School for Boys. His
final report from Buckhurst Road
congratulated him on his success. His class teacher described him as a hard working and earnest little lad whom
it is a pleasure to teach. He
attended Risley Avenue
for four years passing Cambridge Local Junior and Senior Examinations before he
finished his schooling in July 1924.
Class 1A Risley
Avenue Central
School 1920. Archie is front
row second from left.
At his departure
his headmaster, J.H.Williams, wrote
I can
speak most highly of him in every way. His conduct has been exemplary, he has
made admirable use of the various opportunities the school provides and he has
entered heartily into all the various activities of school life. I recommend
him with great confidence as a trustworthy and persevering worker.
Such confidence
was not misplaced as Archie continued to exhibit such qualities throughout his
adult life.


Keith,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading it very much. I liked the way it starts with a clear statement. You captured well the tension in the family about Archie's dad going to the war and the memories that brings. I also liked your descriptions of Tottenham in the early days; your second paragraph is also very good, telling a lot about the family in a very efficient way.
Things that I would consider to enhance the story:
- Archie's feelings about Dad going to war and his fears as a child. What was really in his mind?
- what about Archie's letters to his dad? Even if you have to invent them this would start giving the reader a good idea about Archie as a growing boy; his fears, interests, responsabilities being the "man in the house", etc.
- why not expand the funny incident about burning a hole through the floor? One can feel the humour there but it is very low key (very English) I would explore more the potential of this event for amusing the reader
-finally, how about letting Archie describe to his dad what he was doing in school to earn him a scholarship?
I don't know what is the objective of this piece and how you intend to make fit with the rest but stands well on its own .
I hope this is useful to you.
Frank
DeleteMany thanks for your detailed and helpful comments. They have given me some important ideas to think about. My aim was to seek to establish how some of my father's key qualities developed and influenced his adult life. I thought I would make these more explicit later on, perhaps by the occasional oblique back reference.
I like your ideas for expanding some of the incidents as I could use this to illustrate his interests and characteristics more fully.